Loving Lies

Can't you see how my heart aches;
The way it bleeds for you?
The endless sadness our love makes
A love that's never true.

Author's Note

x____x These poems depress me. Oh well. Any hints to make it better?

Reviews

[al25]

Your poem is quite good. I really enjoyed reading it.

[azlamalo]

simple an good

[Mischa Keats]

I like it, but I have this weird hatred for couplets. The last line is a little cliche, but otherwise it's great.

[Asian Kid.]

It's really nice.