Heartless

Soulless, you say? Heartless?
You don't know the half of it.
Let me tell you more, then.
How you shattered my heart and used that against me.
Take a close look.
Break apart the seams of our relationship
And look deeper.
Hurt;
Betrayal;
Lies;
Ignorance.
Insensitivity.
I could go on.
But from me? The soulless one?
Endless devotion.
No strings attached, neither.
Wasn't my love good enough for you?
Can't you see now, that compared to me...
You're the one that's heartless.

Reviews

[Hamkar]

I like that, anger from the excess from an arguement that the writer had (I said the writer because it may not be you that it happened to even if you wrote it). I really not quite sure what could improve it though at the moment it seems just thoughts. I really do like it.