Sharing the Pain

This is about a friend of mine who has been diagnosed with leukemia.

I'd like to say I don't know you.
You mentioned the idea before,
As a way to save me from all this.
Like I said, that's what I'd like to say.
But I can't.
I just can't.
Not when our lives are linked so tightly,
And I feel your happiness, your sadness, your pain.
I got your letter, and read the note at the bottom.
So you cried while you wrote it, and I cried while I read it.
Do you see what I mean now?
I'm putting on a happy face for the rest of the world to see.
But inside I'm breaking up
As all your hurt floods into my body, for us to share.
It's painful, but I'm okay with it.
Because this way we'll always be together.
Even if the cancer takes you away, too early,
I'll always have a bit of you in my heart.
This way I can love you for all eternity.

Reviews

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Mackenzie, this poem means so, so much to me, the world. I'm going to put it on paper, and keep it with me wherever I go - that's how special it is.
You are incredible at everything you do. You've made me smile and laugh more than anyone else I've ever known and I don't quite know what else to do but THANK you so much for giving me the happiness I needed.
I meant what I said in that letter; How I'll never forget you, the impact you've had on me and the unforgettable friendship you've given me.

Reading the words you wrote brought tears to my eyes. I love you so much and I, also, will love you for all eternity. We're together forever, no matter what.
:)

[Dini]

Oh. My. God. Is this true?
I agree with quralynn. So sad and beautiful. Does anyone know how deep you really are, Mackenzie?

[qaralynn]

this is a really sad and beautiful write....
thnx alot for sharing this

[MissWordSmith]

i want to cry... this was fantastic. i feel you. this was one of the most touching things i have ever read. thank you for writing this, it is a blessing.