I'm Sorry

I'm Sorry

A Poem by [Mackenzie]

I'm sorry I couldn't cope

When you said that you loved me last night

I'm sorry I couldn't help it

I just wanted to run far and hide.

I'm sorry it didn't work out

Our love was just never ment to bloom

I'm sorry I couldn't love you

Maybe it was all just too soon...

© 2009 [Mackenzie]


Author's Note

[Mackenzie]
Ooh, this is baaad.

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Well, I have to be honest and say that this isn't the best poem in the history of poetry, but I think that it could get a whole lot better if you made it longer, or maybe made it into a poetic story using the same theme.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 9, 2009

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[Mackenzie]
[Mackenzie]

Auckland, New Zealand



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My name's Mackenzie, but I'll sign my reviews as Mackeznei because it sounds oh-so-much-cooler. I'm thirteen years old, living in the wonderful country of New Zealand. Oh and I'm a guy now! Unofficial.. more..

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