Love-stop

Ignore the title, please. If you can come up with a better one, please do. A poem about a break-up of some sort.

Burning heat

in a darkened street

Look, the day is dawning;

Passionate kiss,

seductive hiss,

so early in the morning.

Hat pulled down,

no more sound,

She leaves as her shadow grows long,

Heavy sigh,

about to die,

Leaves this world to the tune of birdsong.

Author's Note

I don't knoooow. Review?