Little World

Little World

A Poem by [Mackenzie]

My world is different,

It lives in my dreams,

It breathes and it moves

It's not what it seems.

© 2009 [Mackenzie]


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[Mackenzie]
Too small for recognition ;_;

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No poem is too small. I find short poems to be all the more intriguing, because you can say so much in so few lines. quite frankly, I don't like reading long poems, because I'm lazy.

from this poem I get the sense of you saying that the family or the girl or the guy who looks and acts perfect to the outside world could really be falling apart, a bloody insane mess.

Posted 15 Years Ago



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[Mackenzie]
[Mackenzie]

Auckland, New Zealand



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My name's Mackenzie, but I'll sign my reviews as Mackeznei because it sounds oh-so-much-cooler. I'm thirteen years old, living in the wonderful country of New Zealand. Oh and I'm a guy now! Unofficial.. more..

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