She's Finally Snapped

For the contest 'Teen Diary'

Dear Diary,

 

I think it's happened. It's finally happened. Alec's finally snapped. You know how I told you she used to be all so sweet, and nice, and tidy and organised? She never missed a day of school before. But she hadn't turned up for school day before last, and yesterday she looked so crazy.

 

I never really was friends with her. She seemed to uniform and alien. Hey, maybe the cyborgs that had taken her over have finally let her go. Whatever, she looks much more natural now.

 

She told me that she wanted to say that I could really be a b***h when I wanted to. It sounds silly, but I totally agree. It makes sense, even Mike said I was a b***h sometimes. Speaking of Mike, Alec was talking to him this morning. She had always been scared of him, so I think she really has changed.

 

She actually forgot her lunch this morning. Like, woah. No little nut bars or peanut butter sandwiches for her. That's basically exactly what she said. I'm suddenly liking her a lot more now that she's gone wacko.

 

Maybe her brother sabotaged her lunchbox. Hid it in the closet. That sounds like a very Alastair thing to do. But she's gone, I'm sure of it. And suddenly I find myself wanting to be friends with her.

 

What? I don't like cyborgs.

 

--Jasmine

Reviews

[JuliePetunia]

Organized is spelt wrong, and you used the wrong form of too in too uniform and alien.
This is quite good, I could see it becoming more than a story if maybe Jasmine slammed her diary shut and then threw it at something, leading into the plot. I like it!