Broken

A soft whimper escapes

From bloodied lips.

Your own twist in disgust.

Disgust;

Hatred;

Repulsion;

Irritation.

I cringe away.

You smirk this time.

Is this the effect you wanted?

Fear?

A broken, beaten body?

You lift me by my hair.

Pulling it from my scalp;

Strand by strand.

You throw my body against the wall

Like a ragdoll.

The same effect;

Limp limbs.

Unresponsive.

Unable to defend myself.

Why me?

My eyes, though clouded with pain

Accuse you.

You said you loved me.

You wanted to spend forever with me.

You said that I was your life.

Why, why did I believe such lies?

Obvious now, obvious.

Reviews

[Jemma]

Very "intense".
I have been through things like this. Just in a diffrent way. Your talking about a boyfriend. A lover. A betrayal. And it is hard to accept that those we held so much trust in. Can do such damage.
An easy flow throughout the poem. Very descriptive. Well written and painful.

[dark and twisty]

very intense and sad and raw in its pain and violence...sincerely hope this wasn't inspired by real life...good work nonetheless

[..R.I.P..]

Wow. That's intense and hard for me to read. I feel sorry for the narrator of this piece. It wasn't you was it? Great write all the same(even though it was extremely hard for me to read).
~PJ