Colours

Colours

A Poem by [Mackenzie]
"

I thought of this while I was near sleeping.

"

I look around at the people nearby

I see their colours

Red and yellow,

Green and blue.

Red for anger

Purple for being hurt.

When I look at our hands

Intertwined so tight

I see the palest pink.

Pink for new love,

Sweet love,

Young love,

Shared love.

But when I look at the people watching,

I see green.

Green for jealousy.

© 2009 [Mackenzie]


Author's Note

[Mackenzie]
Wow. I don't like this one ><

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This one is great. I don't think theres any reason you shouldn't like it.
The idea for the poem itself is genious, I think. And the ending completes it all.

And as for the poem itself...

I love it!

xxStaySweet,
Rina

Posted 15 Years Ago



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[Mackenzie]
[Mackenzie]

Auckland, New Zealand



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My name's Mackenzie, but I'll sign my reviews as Mackeznei because it sounds oh-so-much-cooler. I'm thirteen years old, living in the wonderful country of New Zealand. Oh and I'm a guy now! Unofficial.. more..

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