Thaw

Thaw

A Poem by [Mackenzie]
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This is about one of my roleplaying characters.

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For a hundred years,

I sat;

Frozen; immobile.

But now, the ice is melting.

Slowly, slowly,

Day by day,

Season by season.

And when the ice melts

And I am free

Then no-one will be safe.

For a single day, no lives will be spared.

And you;

You will be one of the casualties.

© 2009 [Mackenzie]


Author's Note

[Mackenzie]
>< I hate this one. Oh well.

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Interesting. I like the mental imagine it gives. A person frozen in time, slowly coming back to reality with a smirk on their face because all they want to do is bring havoc. It could use a little bit of work. Maybe a bit more description. But it is good ^^

-Howl

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on April 22, 2009

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[Mackenzie]
[Mackenzie]

Auckland, New Zealand



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My name's Mackenzie, but I'll sign my reviews as Mackeznei because it sounds oh-so-much-cooler. I'm thirteen years old, living in the wonderful country of New Zealand. Oh and I'm a guy now! Unofficial.. more..

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