Love is...

Love is...

A Poem by [Mackenzie]

Love is like the sun.

It provides warmth;

dries tears;

but burns you if you're not careful.

Love is like a flower.

It's a beautiful sight,

but is fragile;

a wrong move can tear it apart.

New love is like a match.

If you use it properly, it can ignite into a warm blaze;

but if you're not attentive, it can fizzle out.

Love is like a wild animal.

With care, it can become your friend and parnter;

but you'll never know when it's going to bite.

Love is...

© 2009 [Mackenzie]


Author's Note

[Mackenzie]
I'm getting so metaphorical on it! Please, all comments welcome.

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Beautiful metaphors in there,because love is what you make it. It can good, it can be bad. I really enjoyed reading this. Nice piece!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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My name's Mackenzie, but I'll sign my reviews as Mackeznei because it sounds oh-so-much-cooler. I'm thirteen years old, living in the wonderful country of New Zealand. Oh and I'm a guy now! Unofficial.. more..

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