Echo

Echo

A Story by Seriana

Echo

If there was but one thing I wished for you to see, to feel… it would be that of the echo which you unknowingly leave upon another soul. It would be the very essence of a memory…..

It is always within us to say we have left nothing upon the trail which we have trod… but always upon the earth are the footprints we silently leave behind…not ever knowing their full effect on time, nor how long they will last to be washed away.

Never underestimate the strength of an action, the warmth of a smile, the generosity of a friend, the cut of a harsh word…for they are all but dust on the wind…tangible substances which will land in the most curious of places….

© 2009 Seriana


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Equal parts beautiful and painful...depending on the graciousness of one's actions or the severity of their sins.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Oh gosh Amber, I surely missed this when it first came out, how lucky I am that it is being featured this day..... its all coming back to me, in bits and pieces how so very wonderful of a poet you truly are... this made me pause so many times to collect myself.. to ponder all of its layers of meanings that I was able to gather from it... yes, it is so true, that sound from the distance, that warm humming reverberating through my skin, in this, you, these words that you compiled, together to pull out thought and emotion that would have otherwise laid dormant in its skin that now and always has resonated throughout, and within the confines of our pouty essence...

xo


Posted 13 Years Ago


This is wonderful! It delivers a powerful message in a gentle way. I really like the metaphor of leaving an echo upon another soul.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow Ambers you always leave me with such a deep impact in my heart with your powerfully moving writes... I think i someone could feel the pain they inflict upon us with there actions they would think twice bout it... this is amazing impactful.

Posted 15 Years Ago


Such a powerful writ ehere, i like this it speaks and teh depth you bring is wonderful

Posted 15 Years Ago


Your echo speaks so powerfully, so beautifully of how our lives are all intertwined... These connections are at times brief, and other times as deep as the ocean... Amazing write...

Posted 15 Years Ago


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Oh Sweets, this is ........ this is ......... gees, one of your most inspired, bare naked writes. Brava. Truly. I see you here. A fav. Very definitely.
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Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on May 6, 2009
Last Updated on June 7, 2009

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Seriana
Seriana

San Antonio, TX



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