Twinkle

Twinkle

 

Every day will come again

Solely, in a different light

Yet, daylight reigns just the same

And in my memory, you reside,

in…time

And I shall find you there,

just the same as you always were

A moment in the whispering wind

A beacon in the darkest of dreams

 

What breaths could I leave,

Who’s paths should I grieve

That I would surrender myself, surely

To be in your place, in between

 

Reviews

[The DuchessPoet]

I see your reviews here and there and I'd hoped that I would write something that would catch you eye...
But today, my talented friend, you've caught mine!

You're very smooth yet deliberate in your execution and I'm infatuated with your style!
Your words:
"And in my memory, you reside,
in�time
And I shall find you there,
just the same as you always were
A moment in the whispering wind
A beacon in the darkest of dreams

What breaths could I leave,
Who's paths should I grieve
That I would surrender myself, surely
To be in your place, in between"

VERY WELL DONE MY FRIEND!
VERY WEEL DONE!

Your fan
The DuchessPoet

P.s.
Thank you for stopping by your reviews mean a lot to me!

[Forest Green]

Your first stanza is intrinsic, heart-measuring and very real.

Your final stanza left me uncertain; but poetry and poets are allowed such license.

Very special work....!

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wow look at the inspiration that I have been missing. The words jumped off the screen into my soul. What an emotional and impactful piece. Some of us on the site write poetry some of us on this site write art. One day i want to write as you have. Awesome write, thanks for requesting that I read this.

[Periac]

And I shall find you there,
just the same as you always were
A moment in the whispering wind

wonderful amber wonderful.........

[Arthur Crow]

This is haunting and beautifully bled.. the lines have an ache that dips deep.

"A moment in the whispering wind

A beacon in the darkest of dreams"

So powerful... Great word weaving!

[Dani California]

Nice landing girl. I like it. So much to be said about a memory -- good and bad. Here, I found it to be somewhat of a haunting memory. One that keeps you chained to it... unable to let go -- or break free rather. "To be in your place, in between.." -- great line :)

[Blue Sky]

You bring awesome imagery with just the right twinkle of words,
rendering beauty with lovely wordings, flow and expression is simply awesome,
great job Amber, another well worth reading piece!

[Legion]

Ah, a residue of a thought never truly forgotten and creeps upon us with the integrity of rememberance. I like. Very good. :)

[Arthur Henn]

What a wonderful poem (Heartfelt)

And I shall find you there.... This is Superb! (It says so MUCH!)

Thank you for sharing your heart and soul with us.

Art

[just is]

What breaths could I leave,
Who's paths should I grieve
That I would surrender myself, surely
To be in your place, in between

This is wonderful, I love these lines.
This is so beautiful.