Baroque

To friendship, to love, to everything good. :)

Baroque

For thee, I shall write the gift of mine heart

Shall it be that you would need…easing of the soul?

Tell me then…tell me how I should sooth thy spirit?

If not the “should”, the “could” would most certainly do.

As delicate as the blooms in flowering harmony

beyond the violin horizon, muted in melancholy notes,

let us paint on our smiles with rainbow-colored tears,

and don our gowns amidst the glowing amber dusk.

Do you feel it, my love? The quiet angelic chorus…

the dance between the affinity of you and me

as they hide beneath fine petticoats of white-linen

always tempting with their tranquil voices

all whilst converging on the melodies of you.

Surely you must know, the expression of your heart…

it serenades the wind with variations on a theme

Could it not be, for once that you should see

a sonata in hue of your seraphim symphony?

Might you, could you, would you…believe

all of this is seen through your baroque masterpiece?

Ahhh, the dawn at long last lights your face

the delightful eternity has finally found its place

With curvature smiles and soft cello concertos

and a suite of transcendent, whimsical glee

tis just the beginning of our….. fairytale story

 

 

 

Reviews

[Dani California]

I agree with Robin, you certainly have a gift for this. What I love about your poetry is the beautiful images, portraits you paint with your words. As you know I have ventured into a new review method and am now aimed at suggesting improvements, but I must say my friend -- I wouldn't change a thing. Well done!

[Dan Bullock]

Drifting wonderfully amongst the clouds of words, ideas and beauty, Fantastic writing and mentally stimulating :D

The very best,

Dan

[Arthur Crow]

Oh you have such an amazing talent! The sincerity of your heart ensures that every word you paint will shine like star light. So romantic� Pure elegance my dear.

[Periac]

this is a wonderful write.....I love its careing backdrop it radiates.....hmmm....one of my favorites absolutly....I usually put a favorite line at this point...but dear...thats impossible!

[Cardinal Robin]

Fabulous! You have a great affinity for this type of poetry. In this I see you reaching out to nurture, another great strength of yours in your writing. I enjoy the colors, the warmth, the soft voices and Dawn lighting the face...exquisite and beautiful sharing.

[Moods]

"Lifelines are only found in fantasies and fairytales" and in this poem you've mapped out a very nice one, with scenery and telltale signs of enchanting love.

Very well done...

S

[Blue Sky]

To EVERYTHING
this is gorgeous,
words just swept the heart away

Might you, could you, would you�believe

[An owl on the moon]

Your words glow like the aurora borealis... Lifting, beautiful, vivid words that raise us up on angel wings!

[just is]

This is so very beautiful as well as very touching, such sincerity, well penned.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh Amber for this art thou a very romantic piece... you speak of new love with such blissful harmony... I could try to pick out my favorite lines but at last it would be futile for I love they whole thing... you have me spellbound in the magic of your art.