Winter's Embrace

Um, so I saw some frost the other day, and some glowing Christmas lights, and voila! Here you have a....very nice moment. :)

Winter’s Embrace

 

With snow-drenched leaves dripping icicle dreams

and our skin..

soft and silken white

Swayed to the rhythm of the darkened moonlight

When droplets of steam dripped on cotton silhouettes

leaving the air sodden with mirrored glimpses

And silence escaped in favor of echoed gasps

Of traced-on paper windows

Laden with drunken, dizzy visions

and satin touches beneath generous heaps

of yesterdays laundry, in silver repeat

With you lowered beneath in soft caresses

adorned by an electrifying touch

admired in these eyes of mine

to taste of...

to breathe in...

Velvet touches on a glazed window pane

smeared on the frosty elixir of you

Reviews

[Delilah Dunn]

Wow...very nice piece here. Your imagery is incredible, with plenty of picturesque language helping to evoke pictures of "inner" (call it what you will :) ) warmth in perfect contrast with the frosty mist of winter. I love your use of color in the poem as well; your direct and indirect references to the colors silver and white were beautifully distributed and emphasized well the message of this piece. Great work. Thank you for sharing.

[Janice Ann]

I love this piece...I can see every line, come to life on my screen...Great work my darlin!

Janice

[Periac]

Of traced-on paper windows

Laden with drunken, dizzy visions

and satin touches beneath generous heaps

of yesterdays laundry, in silver repeat



gulp

[Moods]

Your poem is as unique as the frost on the window pain, singular arrangement of words on glass.

Nicely phrased and pleasantly deep.

S

[Erin]

Fantastic.
The usage of white and silver for winter, and as a purity of love is fantastic.
The lines dealing with melting frost, and the heat of the people help show this relationship as blossoming, and as a new and still pure venture. It makes me a little jealous for what I no longer have.
Great Job.
:)

[DF]

I really enjoyed with one as it really put me in the moment. It's a pleasure to read out loud as well! Great work!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Oh my Amber you really make the cold weather sound so sexy, heating thing up inside with nothing but two loving souls leaving the bitter winter in the distance... stunning piece.

[Blue Sky]

In the depths of this white and frigid season
is a passion that thrives with your incredible words


Velvet touches on a glazed window pane

smeared on the frosty elixir of you


most striking lines, while the beauty
of your words altogether convey such lovely images!

[Arthur Crow]

A sensational scribe. The beauty here is the exquisite descriptions of an almost haunting winter wonderland swooning in a tapestry of sensual delight. This is magical and alluring!

"With snow-drenched leaves dripping icicle dreams"
Immaculate word weaving.

[THE LOST ROSE]

You are amazing. I live in Michigan and I hate winter but this poem makes winter seems sensual. I will now look for the beauty in it thanks to this write. If I wrote about winter it would be about living in a cold hell. This poem was nicely crafted and it flowed with great imagery not that doom and gloom I am use to. Thanks for the read request because I would not have wanted to miss this one.

[Periac]

beautifuly written.....such detail....makes me shiver in smiles...great job!