Landscape

I promise this is the last one for today! I wrote alot yesterday, what can I say? LOL

 

 

Landscape

with precision and certainty

            the pulse of the wind resonates through me

                                    extended visions

           become an image

            and before me lies the tree of truth

her branches amplified

            bent on comprehension

                        a journey diverted

                                    reverberating

                        shuffling down a similar path

            altered only by faltering

 

needs….changing

wants…..leaving

as leisure becomes

                        C O M M O N P L A C E

 

charred remains of dismantled truths

            triumph over shattered layers

                        and newfound proof

muted colors become ……..

                        symmetry

the black and white portrait

            of all i need to be

                        spinning

on the axis of the dusk hour

 

Reviews

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

The world is an ever changing place and if we don't adapt then we can be lost in space... if we just stop and enjoy the moment now and then we can appreciate all the beauty in the world before it is to late... another well versed and beautiful write.

[lilain]

I'm so glad you told me to read this. It is so perfectly scribed - eloquent and flowing. I imagine ribbons of hair blowing on a gentle breeze. It is a perfect image and, yes, somehow, girl, you know how to touch my heart without being near. I love this one!!

[Legion]

Spinning and spinning and spinning....well done. Except for that part about the tree of truth being a female. lol :)

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

AGAIN, ONE OF THE MASTER POETESS ON THIS SITE...SERIANA. I loved it, once again, what can I say??

[THE LOST ROSE]

Wow this flowed and I traveled with the flow of the poem up and down right to left. Beautifully written piece. Sometimes poetry becomes art. This is art. Great write. I am glad I took a break and peek in. Now I can go back to my task inspired. Thank you.