Red Light

Red Light

 

Because the acceptance of one

       Just might ruin the illusion

the other became convinced of...

 

With the betrayal of acceptance

       the fate of the fragile two

now becomes the destiny of denial

 

And shattered dreams fall

       landing on time’s stubborn rock

killing the resonance of the one…

 

Reviews

[Cardinal Robin]

This appears to be a more controlled write from you. I had to read it thoroughly to get the correspondence. It is very true and what I jokingly call "black magic", to concede to a negative or unshared vision does produce denial and delays the progress of the dream. The resonance of the one is only "killed" if the one stays in it while acknowledging a worthy alternative. The only power we have is choice, oh yeah and LOVE! ;)
Man you are intense! :p Great write!

[Ravenskald]

I enjoyed his poem ! :)
response ..

L (Lamed)


Bell of Hate....


No skill


banding

the fate of the fragile



cause ?

head born !

And the rock

time's tiny fate !



might


Try bread


acceptance of one

dual Lightning


tell
the dream

Just ruin the
two illusions

With acceptance the desires
of the other
became convinced...


now becomes of resonance of the one�

[An owl on the moon]

Such a poignant, bitter pain I taste in your words. Each line so full of tears falling like endless rain... Saddens my heart...

[THE LOST ROSE]

I enjoyed the layout and the content in this poem. It came across as though someone did not want someone else to be happy. Maybe I am wrong on this one? I really enjoy the though provoking material you write. I am such a fan. Another great one.

[The Broken One]

I just love your way with words. Everything is so elegantly written. Another great one.

-Chad-

[Arthur Crow]

Quite profound as the meaning is very deep, and you were able to convey so much of it in few words = fantastic poetry!

[John A Common]

Good write. Its short yet powerfull. Nice job.