My Lovely

I WISH he know how lovely he really was. Stubborn men.....

 

My lovely

 

My lovely is beautifully shiny

Like an ancient coin washed up on the shores of my life

He brought fair sight to my eyes

          brought the scent waved upon my nose

                   the bittersweet taste of tears to my lips

                             and the gentle longing of feeling to my touch

And when his gentle whisper tenderly echoed like the summer rain

upon the warmth of his breath in my ear

when he murmured so softly, “I love you”

And when they all blended together

          All of these senses stirred to life the beat of my still heart

                   through my veins did course the pulsating amorous blood

My lovely...

He lives in me

and I, in him

The only thing separating us….is time

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

this is gorgeous.. such a beautiful poem of love ..
i enjoyed every word.
chloe

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

sounds like the "portal to my heart" poem i wrote. we have the same minds. lol. what a lovely piece. always a breath of fresh air when i read your poetry. i always anticpate something worth reading, and i'm always right too. thanks.

kena

[Ocean Orchid]

A serene piece of work with exceptional expressions .....

My lovely is beautifully shiny
Like an ancient coin washed up on the shores of my life
He brought fair sight to my eyes

[Dalaina Renee]

I love love poems! Good one!

[lauren emily]

Falling in love is truly magical.
Very nice work, keep it up!
~Lauren

[Brianna Brie]

My lovely...
He lives in me
and I, in him
The only thing separating us�.is time

Yes, this is true. Love transcends time and even distance. Beautiful writing.

[Spat Queen]

I have difficulty writing romace, myself. This is very sweet.

[Periac]

oooo who is this past sinner......very good write......a shivering dream

[Jai]

Where were you,
So long ago?
Now emerging from a seed
That I did sow?
Planted in the depths of the heart
Where once I did go...
Cultivated in the darkness,
Under the snow.
Astonished and proud,
I watch her grow...

[An owl on the moon]

So powerful... So beautiful... Sensuous and moving like an ancient river meandering through a soft meadow... Your words are a delight and joy, celebrating love in its deepest devotion!

Craig