Tremor

Tremor 

Blurred vibrations of sound 

surround all around me, 

pressing close without a touch. 

A bit much, if you ask me, 

to be in a space of repel 

and swell of the sounds 

and mounds of energy waves 

that cascade from above 

to evaporate upward from below 

as though the low depths 

mean little more than aloft. 

 

A soft pulse pushes and pulls, 

until I’m overflowing with senses 

that mean nothing but distraction 

from elsewhere in the universe. 

Reviews

[An owl on the moon]

There is a beautiful intimacy here in your words... and a vast nebula of space... energy pulsing... the whole universe alive with your story. Seems you are transforming... a transmutation... conversion or transformation of one element into another... so may you melt into every good thing.

[Seriana]

Thank you kindly for your thoughts!!! They are always poetry in themselves and I cherish them.

[Fabian G. Franklin]

I like the feel of this and the wording. But I'd sleep with the radio blaring if my wife and the neighbors would allow it. I enjoyed the read.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

Strangely this, although appearing to express distress in the first stanza, left me seeing the protagonist alone in bed in the dark with the sound of silence filling the room as gradulaay they feel the heat of arousal.

[Dave]

I can feel the turbulence roiling in your world. You make it so vivid, impossible not to become part of it. Thank you for sharing this beautiful work.
Take care - Dave

[Seriana]

Thank YOU Dave. Appreciate you stopping by to enjoy.

[Dave]

I always enjoy your work. I'm posting a short story.MINDY.. I think you might like meeting this interesting teen.
Take care - Dave

[emmajoygreen]

What an intense feeling, whether it be physical, mental or the two combined.
Would think it a combination of out.of.worldness: uncontrollable, unforgetable
Temperature flying - a denied free fall

[Seriana]

Thank you Emma for your kind words. Appreciate the review!

[emmajoygreen]

You are very welcome!