Musings

Because sometimes we find ourselves lost in thoughts...

Musings 

 

caught up ~ 

~ in a moment of disregard for the everyday, 

daydreaming, 

streams of thought  

gone by the wayside of a day, 

this day, 

this moment, 

as time passes on 

while eyes are glazed over in…??? 

 

am thinking of him again… 

the scenarios, 

his moments.....his silence,  

his time with mine 

piling up in mountains of make-believe 

 

muddled puddles meddling through my mind... 

 

it’s so confusing... 

I try coming back,  

to here, 

a space that was mine, 

one that was ours just moments ago, 

before logic strayed from me, 

in hindsight, 

tik-tock thoughts lost on time

Reviews

[FGFRANKLIN]

They say there's no future living in the past and I believe it. But sometimes in certain matters, memories are all we have left to treasure of certain times and people in our lives. And each person or experience deserves the space we allow it. But that doesn't mean we must dwell on it or build on it. It's just a recognition of its existence, not a denial but an acceptance.

[Seriana]

Thank you for your kind review! Yes, sometimes a song, a sight, some kind of sense takes me there for a brief moment. A count to 3 and then it's gone. A recognition of its existence, indeed.

[An owl on the moon]

Such beautifully profound, bittersweet musings, dear poet. I can feel the stories, alive in each line... the places they carry you to... the shadows that linger there of your light. So grateful to find more words flowing from you... thank you so much for sharing... so good to find your voice here again.

[Seriana]

Always seems to be bittersweet lately. But you? ALWAYS the sweetest. Thank you for your kindness, Craig.

[An owl on the moon]

Must be why I drink unsweet tea... cause I'm sweet enough already... 😂 Thank YOU for always spreading light wherever you go... 😁

[John the Baptist]

The past can have a retarding grasp on our lives if we allow it to. We must come back to here every time we feel the past try to pull us back.

[Seriana]

Yes John, we are not going that direction, are we? It's a hard habit to break.

[Chris Shaw]

These lines have such a lovely dreamy quality about them. So easy to get lost in thoughts and travel further and further afield before drifting back to reality. So relatable Seriana. So very nicely conveyed.

Chris

[Seriana]

Chris! Blessings to you for your kind review.

[AYVID N]

So much can happen in our thoughts. We can be lost in them, in their muddled puddles and the mountains of make believe. It can be so difficult to return to a space that's ours, to a place of sensibility. Such relatable words for me. It was wonderful to read.

[Seriana]

Thank you DIVYA. Glad you could relate to this.

[AYVID N]

You are most welcome Seriana.

[willweb]

Wow, such a cool piece. The indecision is felt though the direction seems clear but one will not accept. Really good

[Seriana]

Thank you again! So glad you like my writing. Makes me smile when I see your reviews. Have a super Sunday!