My Prince

Because the fairytale is real. You've all taught me that. :)

My Prince... 

You are not perfect, 

but you are for me. 

To feel the warmth of you 

melt through my fingertips when we touch,  

Beneath... 

The softness of your lips 

when they sweetly brush mine... 

I know the strength of you, 

cuddled in your humble arms, 

caressed with your passionate touch... 

My love... 

I feel you even now, 

within my mind's eye, 

a dazzy haze of moments yet to come... 

I know you are not perfect, 

But you are. 

For me. 

Reviews

[A.E. Surdam]

I loved this! After I read this, I had flashbacks to my high school/middle school years when I yearned for my prince charming to sweep me off my feet, but now that I am an adult, reality unfortunately was the only one who showed up to court me. I still have yet to find my prince charming, but after reading your poem, the feelings from my younger years have re-blossomed inside me. Here's to hoping that he is somewhere out there.

[Seriana]

That is so sweet! Thank you for your lovely thoughts. Cheers to finding Prince Charming!

[tranquilspace]

Your poem expressed how imperfect a person is, yet you choose to love that person. very well put

[Seriana]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you felt that way. :)

[ev vileville]

You are a natural. I love the descriptive language and the emotion you put in your words.

[Seriana]

Thank you for your wonderful review! Appreciate your kindness :)

[emmajoy]

Reality written in such romantic words! To love in spite of- if a true gift. Just as it is in spite of the past caging a person in history. Your tone is always gentle, your emotions laid 'pon a silky sleeve, That ssaid, you seem to recognise the dangers of caring too much, that matters, dear Seriana. Keep safe, take care.

'.. a dazzy haze of moments yet to come.- I know you are not perfect, - But you are. - For me. '

[Seriana]

Thank you dearest Em....Appreciate your thoughts and YOU.
Stay safe yourself...thinking of you

[Kerra]

This is such a wonderful write, uplifting as well. Nicely written & expressed

[Seriana]

Thank you so much for your kind review. I appreciate it!

[barleygirl]

Your poem is expressed with depth of feeling & most would feel reassured to know he/she is perfect for someone, despite being imperfect in many ways (since most people are too hard on themselves). I'm not a fan of simple romantic poems like this . . . I prefer more meat to sink my teeth into. I want to know more about this connection . . . give me more layers, more depth. But most readers prefer a romantic message to be clearly heartfelt like this.

Someone told me this morning that my poetry can be an "endurance test" to get thru . . . which is an excellent description! It's the difference between how I like my poetry (both reading & writing) . . . compared to most readers & poets who embrace lyrical straightforward sentiments like yours! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[Dave]

Love erases the imperfections. In our hearts, in our minds, all we see, all we feel is our and their love.
How can there be an imperfection in such perfection? Nicely done Seriana.
Take care - Dave

[Seriana]

Thank you Dave! So glad you enjoyed. :)

[Chris Shaw]

Endearing write Seriana to sing the praises of your Prince. No one is perfect yet the imperfections are unique to that individual and can add to the attraction. A lovely little tribute here with uplifting sentiment. All good wishes.

Chris

[Seriana]

Thank you Chris for your wonderful review! So glad you enjoyed this.

[Chris Shaw]

I did my friend. Thank you :)

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

That is right. as humans we are not perfect but there is one who is perfect to us. I love this sweet and sentimental poem.

[Seriana]

Thank you Dale

[Poetic Beauty]

This is a beautiful poem about love. “You may not be perfect but are you are for me” unconditional love

[Seriana]

Thank you PB! Always a pleasure to see you stop by :)

[Poetic Beauty]

You are welcome. It’s always a joy to venture into reading one of your poems