An Ordinary Day

An Ordinary Day

 

our days are filled with (extra)ordinary “things”

 

things………………………………………………………….

 

“things” which occupy the mind,

 

or so we think,

 

significant.

 

Things of relevance while we type our hearts out on autopilot,

 

for most any,

 

and maybe all

 

for pleasure?

 

Or hire?

 

The bills still need paying

 

and no one’s won the lotter today.

Reviews

[Betty Hermelee]

It seem like your comparing the mundane things we think of everyday, with the creative side of us, that is writing our poems, even though it may be on auto pilot. The problem is none of this pays the bills, but we sure get some pleasure out of some of it.
Nice brevity poem, enjoyed it!
Best Betty

[Seriana]

Thank you so much Betty! Loved that you stopped by and left a note, and enjoyed some words together. Thanks for the review :)

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome!

[Dave]

Surely, it must be the pleasure, that compels us to write. To put our hearts on our sleeves in the hope that somehow, in some way others will find some relevance in what we say.

Take care -Dave

[Seriana]

Thank you Dave! Appreciate you stopping by and leave a kindness :)

[S.zaynab.kamoonpury]

I like poems that touch on routines and day to day life and you have incorporated poetry nicely into it how it may serve as release to many, wow autopilot writing sounds impromptu. Kudos for fab poem!

Plz do read and comment my newest poem too .

[Seriana]

Thank you so much for the kind words! I shall return the favor!