Venom

 

Venom

 

I’m shrouding

And clouding

Stealing your mind

It’s a new sensation

Is it not?

To have me

in your mind?

You knew

You’ve always known

I was there

Beside you

Guiding you

Residing in you

Holding you

Controlling you

Feeling you

Feeding on you

How does it feel?

Tell me

how it feels?

Clawing your way out

Scratching the surface

Silently screaming

How does it feel

To taste my poison?

Does it please you

Like you thought it would?

Do you relish the taste

Of my tainted flesh

On the tip of your tongue?

If only I’d have known

What then, my love?

Tell me now

Tell me where you are?

I’m not for the faint of heart

You can’t kill this beast

I’m the toxin

Running through your veins

Seeking destruction

Eternal damnation

On the hollow of your soul

Just one small lick

Sweet boy

Stick out your tongue

And taste

I promise

I won’t bite

 

 

 

Reviews

[Eyudo]

wow, there arent even words from me to describe what i think of that one, all is i can say is ever word is good, so many things that reminds me of, especially revenge, *awwed*

[The Broken One]

DARK DARK DARK!!! This one I love. Great work.

[Periac]

i took this as somewhat of a bribe...or even so a dare and i ran with it in that perspective....the concusion was amazing.....great job amber!

[Legion]

I'm ascared. Run away! Run away! Intense write. Well done.

[darkgurl]

WOW! Now this sis just plain awesome! love this write it just has a certain flair to it. Very well penned.

[A Lost Man Found]

It is getting to where when I click on your poems, I go in preparing to love it. You never disappoint.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOW Seri, you tell it with such dark passion... I believe I've been hooked on a girl like this once... the power they hold... so bad for you yet would die to have them... very intense but dangerously delicious... I want to taste the sweet poison.

[lilain]

Grrrr, this is delicious, Seri. I love the venom in your words. You surely make him want to taste even at the risk of demise... a black widow in a way.

Well done - love the intensity!