Enchanted

 

Enchanted

 

Oh, how I miss thee...

on warm, sunny days

when bright the sun shines

How could such delight

come from such humble thoughts?

When do I dwell upon thy heart

in myriad shades of blue,

do you feel me, too?

Might the colors of my heart

be welcomed in your eyes?

Like leaves…

begging for the breeze,

do I miss thee, love.....

To flow in harmony on the wind,

to soar the mountains high,

as the eagle in flight

To swim the oceans deep

the currents my guide....

 

Oh what love is this that takes me to such depths?

Might I have been Shakespeare in another life

for the joyous ways in which I feel and miss....

Sighs could never be enough,

for the ways in which mine heart expels it's love for thee....

the smallest drop of a tear

could but bring torrents of emotion upon its release.....

Upon your finger does it rest, for you to taste of its strength...

Until then...

until the moon shines brightly in our northern sky,

guiding your path to me...

until the dawn comes, silent on the twilight morn....

until then, my love.....you are mine.......

 

 

Reviews

[Michael Raymond Robinso..]

Very Shakespeare. Wonderful imagery and a beautiful romantic ode. I love the last:

Until then...
until the moon shines brightly in our northern sky,
guiding your path to me...
until the dawn comes, silent on the twilight morn....
until then, my love.....you are mine.......

Can't really say much else, it was well done, it truly speaks for itself.

[An owl on the moon]

Nine years, sis, and yet your voice still flows with the beautiful, aching enchantment of those worlds you hide within you. So thankful you let each threaded word weave the warmth around us all. Lifting my cup to you now, and wishing you a most blessed Christmas and your best New Year yet. Yes, enchanted in every way.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are he Modern day Shakespeare but so much more lovely... speaking of lovely so is this poem... so enchanting and breathtaking... the emotional feel is perfect. It shows that great passion that your heart holds.

[Joseph - Michael]

Very nice prosing... I do enjoy Shakespeare as well, so it's a real great inspiration to be expressed like that along with a spice of fairy tale...

All I can say is that I'm really speechless, because I seriously enjoyed this piece all the way...

Other than that, it's still great tho...

[Ravenskald]

Nice Imagery

Until then...
until the moon shines brightly in our northern sky,
guiding your path to me...
until the dawn comes, silent on the twilight morn....
until then, my love.....you are mine.......

;-)

[Partha]

amazing poem. I was feeling like I'm being drifted into the world of eternal love and fairy tales while reading this. the poetic words effectively express your vivid imagination. good work!

[Arthur Henn]

WOW! What can one say, this is "Superb!" a well written poem for someone you love. Very nice. He is one lucky guy :)

Art

[Periac]

wonderful piece ...i love the emotion you show in such vivid words....Like leaves begging for the breeze

do I miss thee, love.....
To flow in harmony on the wind
to soar the mountains high,
as the eagle in flight
To swim the oceans deep
the currents my guide....

amazing for the time piece you created

[Windy]

Wow, not even sure what to say except....Bravo! Excellant write. Windy

[Antonio Valentino]

This was sensually sweet and loving Seri.
Enchanted, you truly are!
An incredible write!

Rich