Mechanical Worms

 

Puppet masters and

screamin' demons

parasites of mass deception

paralyze with your leeching machinations

siphoning through pleasure perverse

 

Anathema!! Epitome of evil

label us to fit your will

feed on wicked corruption

ooze your vile lies

poison with the hiss of your venomous tongue

vomit out your foul heart

 

Be afraid!!

As your betrayal evaporates

your eyes---open

your victim---silent defender

suffocate on sinewy condemnation

as you wretch up your mechanical worms

 

Reviews

[A Lost Man Found]

For the first time in my life, I am at a loss for words. wait, wait a minute, I feel a funny comment coming on. yep there it is. this is my last word on this particular subject. here it goes. Ahem,,.................................

GIVE GOD HIS @$%!ING PEN BACK! NO HUMAN SHOULD BE ALLOWED TO WRITE SOMETHING THAT GOOD, THAT FULL OF MEANING. THAT IS SO NOT FAIR.

[The Broken One]

Wow Amber. Where did this one come from? I like it a lot. Reminds me of one of my rants, only done so much better. Vey good job. This one rocks.

-Chad-

[Dani California]

Yikes!! Amber...lol.
I know you said you were feeling emo today,

but ...

WOW!!

This is fantastic!
Ah yes, what is in the dark will eventually emerge into light --
thus exposing the hidden secrets -- the lies.

The snake...

You go girl!

I love it! Saving to favs!!

[Flow]

Many key points in this one, I like the part with labels as they are used by so many to control what people believe. Your poetry is dipping into the more soulful lyrics and they more and more wonderful as you write!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You go on with your bad self... it is true that those who live their lives in lies will also die by them as well... you can rant with the best of them my friend.

[lilain]

Yes, this is intense! I love the words and the strong message you are conveying. You've got something powerful stirring and it shows in this work. Nicely done, luv.

[Periac]

awesome!!....this screams to me in absolute wonderful truths....i want to read this to everyone at fox news and i could go on.....i'm impressed as others have noticed your completly different way to present us your writing....great job amber;)

[Legion]

A piece of different levels. I see ranting against corporations. Against government. Against the organized religions of the world that are corrupt. Against control of the masses against the individual. Lots of potential for this one. I like it and I applaud it. Bravo!

[Blue Sky]

Takes one to a different level of understanding
I'm surmised viruses of the very machinations
of this day and age, as they wretch up their
mechanical worms, such a spectacular piece!

[Brandon]

This is different from your norm as far as wording is concerned, but still well done. (as usual)