Had a feeling that by the end of this poem. 'would be feeling so much for and about you, your past and enduring thoughts, Seriana. This is such an intensely personal write, hints of this or that, plus - even if anyone knew a little more, nobody can feel as you do.
As always you've somehow used delicate phrasing with emotional emphasis Tis your way.. Keep safe and so much more. Hugs.
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4 Years Ago
Thank you. I am left speechless by your words. You know. There are unseen connections btw those of u.. read moreThank you. I am left speechless by your words. You know. There are unseen connections btw those of us sometimes where we speak through our poems. It is an ethereal feeling.
Thank you again!
4 Years Ago
I can't feel what you feel, but I can try to understand and then, admire how you deal, have dealt an.. read moreI can't feel what you feel, but I can try to understand and then, admire how you deal, have dealt and will deal with your life, dear you.
How your words open a world of mystery... the soul's treasures, lost in time. It did make me wonder how many have such a box... locked away... key covered in dust... sweet moments hidden forever... May you always keep your box close... your joy accessible... your treasures embraced so you feel their fullness. Beautiful confessions, dear poet. So good to have more poetry flowing through you.
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4 Years Ago
Dearest brother...you know, too. I think....I now understand your other world. But as I stand in my .. read moreDearest brother...you know, too. I think....I now understand your other world. But as I stand in my mind and see this room with the box and the light shining through...I am there and it is real. It is as it should be for a time. Like the burrow.
Thank you for the kindness of your review.
4 Years Ago
I am so grateful that you once more opened your box of words.. and spoke them over the page. Yes, yo.. read moreI am so grateful that you once more opened your box of words.. and spoke them over the page. Yes, you understand so well. Perhaps your key will open countless other worlds.
Had a feeling that by the end of this poem. 'would be feeling so much for and about you, your past and enduring thoughts, Seriana. This is such an intensely personal write, hints of this or that, plus - even if anyone knew a little more, nobody can feel as you do.
As always you've somehow used delicate phrasing with emotional emphasis Tis your way.. Keep safe and so much more. Hugs.
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Thank you. I am left speechless by your words. You know. There are unseen connections btw those of u.. read moreThank you. I am left speechless by your words. You know. There are unseen connections btw those of us sometimes where we speak through our poems. It is an ethereal feeling.
Thank you again!
4 Years Ago
I can't feel what you feel, but I can try to understand and then, admire how you deal, have dealt an.. read moreI can't feel what you feel, but I can try to understand and then, admire how you deal, have dealt and will deal with your life, dear you.
Would imagine a lot of houses have that lonely shelf, dust ridden and timeless.
I suppose we all do it, store it all away hoping maybe it will stay away, but sadly it stays just waiting for that day.
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4 Years Ago
Thank you Paul for your kind words. :) I appreciate the review!!