The Archer

I don't really know what to say about this one, I just threw it together :)

You are strong as the morning sun

As your radiance reach the sky

Like an eagle:you could fly so high;

While I'm a dreamer;

A dreamer in your eyes...

Like ten thousand lives

Before I could reach you back again;

For I just wanna be reincarnated

Just to see you once again.

As the sea waves its water

I'll be as fierce as the strongest wind;

Just to reach that ship where you are in...

But then, I couldn't hold you;

Nor touch you even a glimpse..

For I am like a feather

Wishing a million stars to fall

Just to kill the time and

Start all over again.

Reviews

[SpeedyHobbit Armstrong]

this definitely transpired to be very different from what I expected with the title you chose for this poem! I definitely like this piece but am having difficulty figuring out how the title applies

[Adam Lebzo -RonninWarri..]

That's quite nice!
I like this one very much

"A dreamer in your eyes..." (Y)

[Nick.B]

Beautiful, very vivid, the past can be a never ending flame that's still burning until it's time to let it go and start over...great job

[Sarah Marie]

This is beautifully written. I love the praising and longing behind this piece. Great write!

[Angela ☄️]

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it! :D

[YouoweYoupay]

Beautiful. Your product of words is delicate with many deep images and flashbacks. Thank you for posting.

-Rain.

[Eddie Phillips]

As the sea waves its water
I'll be as fierce as the strongest wind;
Just to reach that ship where you are in...

That was a great passage of the poem. Strong and yet devoted to love. I loved the idea of that. Great poem.

[Angela ☄️]

Thank you :3

[Weasley]

Super beautiful. I really love your work.

[Angela ☄️]

Thank you! I really love your picture ^-^

[An owl on the moon]

This is so beautiful... time after time... the reflections of the past.. of love lost and the wishing for it to come again in a new form... a new life... May you find all you wish.

[Angela ☄️]

Hmmm... I really hope I do... :) I have faith in God that I will. :)

[An owl on the moon]

And nothing.. absolutely nothing is impossible with God... :)

[Angela ☄️]

You took the words right our of my mouth, ma cherie :)

[An owl on the moon]

They did seem a little wet... :D

[Angela ☄️]

Well of course :D They came out of my mouth!

[An owl on the moon]

Laughing! Yes indeed... :D

[Angela ☄️]

hahahahahah... I'll stick something else in my mouth.. XD

[An owl on the moon]

A nice steak would be nice... hahahaha!!! :D

[Angela ☄️]

Yummyyyy! :D I looove steak!

[Winchester Saltgunner]

well.........................................................................its good idk

[Angela ☄️]

Thanks xD It's not about you just so you know :p