Hurricane

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You are the light and I am the storm

I am a hurricane

Dripping with affection,

But I’m hiding,

Because with that affection I become weak

As my strength diminishes I retell the tale of heartbreak,

Reliving every crushing moment

Pulling the weight of restriction around,

Inflicting pain at every chance given       

I am a hurricane

I am the initial drop of rain from the storm

I am the impact of the first wave as it hits

I am the loud crashing noise that is echoed for everyone to hear

I am the pain bringer

I am the unpredicted sadness

Bringing sorrow to others

Author's Note

Please review this! Positive/Negative feedback is needed! Thank you! it's for my book!

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

It was a very strong write, well done.

[Serena Monteleone]

Thank you that means a lot to me!

[Katie]

Wow that's deep and really good, but are you saying that you say you bring sadness?

[Serena Monteleone]

Yeah and thank you so much!

[Katie]

Your Welcome! luv ya

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

"As my strength diminishes I retell the tale of a heartbreak". Nice line.

[Serena Monteleone]

thank you! :D

[ron]

This was very good. I felt the pain and the sorry needing to be released. It is very good.

[Serena Monteleone]

Thank you so much!

[ron]

You are most welcome.