Hurricane

Hurricane

A Poem by Serena Monteleone
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I SERIOUSLY NEED REVIEWS ON THIS! THANK YOU <33333

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You are the light and I am the storm

I am a hurricane

Dripping with affection,

But I’m hiding,

Because with that affection I become weak


As my strength diminishes I retell the tale of heartbreak,

Reliving every crushing moment

Pulling the weight of restriction around,

Inflicting pain at every chance given       


I am a hurricane

I am the initial drop of rain from the storm

I am the impact of the first wave as it hits

I am the loud crashing noise that is echoed for everyone to hear

I am the pain bringer

I am the unpredicted sadness

Bringing sorrow to others

© 2013 Serena Monteleone


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Serena Monteleone
Please review this! Positive/Negative feedback is needed! Thank you! it's for my book!

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It was a very strong write, well done.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena Monteleone

11 Years Ago

Thank you that means a lot to me!
Wow that's deep and really good, but are you saying that you say you bring sadness?

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena Monteleone

11 Years Ago

Yeah and thank you so much!
Katie

11 Years Ago

Your Welcome! luv ya
"As my strength diminishes I retell the tale of a heartbreak". Nice line.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena Monteleone

11 Years Ago

thank you! :D
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ron
This was very good. I felt the pain and the sorry needing to be released. It is very good.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Serena Monteleone

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much!
ron

11 Years Ago

You are most welcome.

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Added on September 9, 2013
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Serena Monteleone
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Hey my name is Serena! I am 17 years old and I am a college student. I have one published book of poetry and I'm continuing to write in my free time! more..

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