Perfection

Perfection

A Poem by Serena Monteleone

They say it takes ten thousand hours to perfect something. 
As of right now I have loved you 10,727 hours. 
I know I have perfected that by now. 

But you have been alive 133,424 hours and I know that you became perfect in less than ten thousand hours.
So I don’t know how true that is.

© 2013 Serena Monteleone


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Lovely, and so true. no one is perfect and no one should try and live to be other than the perfect you, you can be lol if that makes sence ;) lovely job!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Serena Monteleone

11 Years Ago

aw thank you! I agree!
A highly unusual and inventive write. The mathematical certainty of numbers and the changeable quality of emotions can indeed go together. An interesting read . ~ Robert.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Serena Monteleone

11 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on September 6, 2013
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Serena Monteleone
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Hey my name is Serena! I am 17 years old and I am a college student. I have one published book of poetry and I'm continuing to write in my free time! more..

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