Graphite love

Cool against my skin,
As I explore your lattice.
A pious act.
You don't scare me mista;
Even when you catch fire.
Naturally,
I crave a little burn;
When, I'm as graphite as love.

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

This feels decidely devilish in content and in attitude.
I felt the same way as I felt when I first saw Madonna's 'Like a Prayer' video.
I was shocked by it's irreverence (hey that's a word with four 'e's in it !!) - sorry Suri where was I - oh yeah!...shocked then I saw the point.

Nicely done.

[S. S. Allen]

Thank you Tony! I look forward to your reviews in all honesty. I was thinking I could be fierce in this one! Seems I have accomplished that. Thanks again :)))

[Tony Jordan]

Yes. Mission Accomplished Suri
:))