Close to the sun

Love's a burning flame,

Icarus flying too close to the sun,

Ashes spiraling to the floor,

Slowly.

Reviews

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

As soon as you mentioned Icarus I knew where this was driving towards. Love is something very special but one must take caution. Thanks for that!

[S. S. Allen]

Absolutely so...and you are welcome 😊

[Neal S]

Simple and beautiful! A most lovely piece.

[S. S. Allen]

Thank you Neal S. Appreciate your comments.

[Neal S]

My pleasure

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Nice limning, short and beautiful! Love the title. Tyfs!

[S. S. Allen]

Thank you so much!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

My pleasure!