why death is a mystery
A Poem by
Nobody.
no son!
don't touch that.
it's dead.
the ants make the eyes
move, and that strange
music is coming from
somewhere else.
it's not a puppy
anymore.
um, yeah,
he's in Heaven now.
yes,
just like grandma.
don't let those maggots
get on your new shoes.
© 2011 Nobody.
Reviews
I love the blunt manner of the final lines. Such a well described scene in a clever manner constructed of snippets.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Ha!....Damn, you have a clinical approach to the everyday s**t. Its the genius that is R.G. Johnson, curator of the life that lives just beneath the surface.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Ha!....Damn, you have a clinical approach to the everyday shit. Its the genius that is R.G. Johnson, curator of the life that lives just beneath the surface.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Wow, this is hilariously disturbing. I was laughing to the bank on this one.
Favorited.
Posted 13 Years Ago
Wow, this is hilariously disturbing. I was laughing to the bank on this one.
Favorited.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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Added on September 27, 2011
Last Updated on September 27, 2011
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