steps toward the cure

steps toward the cure

A Poem by Nobody.

(7pm)

twinkle-eyed laughter

bathes me like dew

moonlight worn as blush

 

(9pm)

her smile turns crooked

12 red buttons pop

Earth howls a rich fleshy rhapsody

 

(7am)

morning lies down

like a freshly fed mongrel

 skyline in oranges and reds

 

(8am)

candy coated

daydreams

have melted into

a glorious new

reality

 

(6:59pm)

check my pulse

with a Richter scale

8.0 and rising

© 2011 Nobody.


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Such vivid color. Actions and reactions spill over the page, whoa.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You have such a range within your works. This is short, succinct yet it tells such a lot. Each snippet a vivid image and scene, compact and perfect.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I always admire how you set a tone , and its rarely translates to me literally ... it's always speaks in music , something that has little more emotion honesty than mere words

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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