The Dream

The Dream

A Poem by Nobody.

I’m eating something that once

called the ocean its home with a fork

and a pair of orange handled needle-nose pliers .

She’s talking about the dead soldier kids

the paperboy keeps tossing on our lawn.

A red bird sits on the statue outside,

singing a blue song, but it sounds

more like white noise in the mix down.

I look at the angry microwave clock,

and realize that it’s time to make a decision:

Should I stay sober and try to get her

out of that hideous green bathrobe,

and into some kind of after-dinner kink,

or should I drink until I can’t feel myself

imploding? Hell, Maybe I’ll do both.

God it’s sexy being free! As I break up

a bag of scentless dry brown pot, and twist

open the first cheap beer of the day, I know

I’m really living the American dream.

The f*****g wonder never ceases!

© 2011 Nobody.


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Welcome to Americana, as that one guy from that one band said on that one album.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is great, the bland truth of the facade of daily life. I love
"Should I stay sober and try to get her
out of that hideous green bathrobe,
and into some kind of after-dinner kink,
or should I drink until I can’t feel myself
imploding?"

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very clear and cool, strong voice. I'd like it better if you dropped the last line but either way you consistently write some of the best most perceptive poetry here

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

explosive

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Just so excellent in concept and execution (and I use that word deliberately).

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

if yer not gonna take that flag down , you make sure you keep a light on it ..

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dripping. Love it!!

"She’s talking about the dead soldier kids
the paperboy keeps tossing on our lawn." The image this sparked, quite remarkable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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