cold anticipation

cold anticipation

A Poem by Nobody.

her long lacy calm has been devoured

by inner fire; a titan rage of diesel smoke

and self-told lies.

 

she’s been gone a while.

only remnant: an auto-piloted husk;

a lump of rot with a lipstick smile

painted on the largest hole.

 

it wanders the dirty back-roads

of a celestial border town seeking

an unholy sword on which to impale

itself.

 

but, the poor creature is always

back by dinnertime,

and the stains wash out easily;

at least the surface stains.

what lies beneath can’t be

salvaged.

 

when she stands too closely,

the earth seems nervous

and the stars all turn inside-

out.

 

I dug a grave in the yard,

so I'll be ready when the sky

caves in.

 

© 2011 Nobody.


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Hmmm...this reminds me of something to do with a serial killer.
There are some really good lines in this:a lump of rot with a lipstick smile
but, the poor creature is always

back by dinnertime,
and the stains wash out easily;
when she stands too closely,
the earth seems nervous
I wonder what would happen when the sky caves in:))


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I like the last stanza as well, because coffins are overrated.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Profound understanding of life and its end.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is creepy and yet sad at the same time
urine and tears

in a good way

really nice man

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

These poems, this style, the apocalyptic vision.... Holy S**t!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm...this reminds me of something to do with a serial killer.
There are some really good lines in this:a lump of rot with a lipstick smile
but, the poor creature is always

back by dinnertime,
and the stains wash out easily;
when she stands too closely,
the earth seems nervous
I wonder what would happen when the sky caves in:))


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you have an absolute mastery of poetic skill, my new friend, bravo

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"a lump of rot with a lipstick smile painted on the largest hole."

Killer line!

Last stanza hits it home too, man. The whole thing is like a gaping machete wound (that's a compliment, coming from me.)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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