eyelids bounce and settle

eyelids bounce and settle.   

 

opiate wave of naked warmth.

slip the grip of a worrisome cross.

 

one final orgasmic thrust

before the day and I deflate.

 

all glorious battle hymns end

like throat-slit screams.

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Make sure the right creamer went into your coffee after you wrote this.

[Kerry O'Connor]

What it is to get lucky first thing in the morning... then write orgasmic poetry over your first cup of coffee.

Show off!

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

Many stories told all wrapped around into something divinely harsh. A quick scene which presses to so much more. I love that last stanza, so sharp with a great feeling.

[freelancejouster]

your way with words tells a story that even your stories can't match. this is beautifully ugly, and shiver-making. as always.

[ju]

i keep reading it. and i like it. but i don't know what to say. so- i like. that's the review. i'm fleeing now b4 the rubbish-review police catch me.

[.......]

I loved the last stanza,
Has a wonderful flow to it.