the last thing I heard before....

shhh.

       come closer.

I'm about to burst into flames.

Reviews

[Vanny]

I loved the "shhh" seduction that is a bit humorous. Well done. -S...

[.......]

LOL! THis one gets to the funny bone!

[Tim Lion]

ha! yes. shhh. back away I'm about to drop an atomic poem! good stuff.

[emona]

short an simple ^^ love it

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

this is the definition of seduction~

[Ariel B.]

I love this! How splendid to begin a poem with "shhh." It's like lowering your voice on stage, so that the audience automatically all lean in closer so they don't miss a single word.

[Amy Bumpas]

I would come closer just to dare you.....

[MuSe Ampoule]

ooooh...I knew you were on fire, hotstuff!!! ;)

[Robin]

before you do , I want you to write a screenplay ...

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

ha ha ha love it!