something big must be wrong

something big must be wrong

A Poem by Nobody.

something big must be wrong

 

be-

cause

      every time I pray

 

I hear busy signals

or

muffled sniffles

 

on the other end

of the line

 

except, once,

when I was rerouted

to a call center

in

India

© 2011 Nobody.


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

"Thank you for calling Microsoft customer support, a representative will be with you in just a moment."

I got through once...but was hung up on after a 15 minute hold. I think maybe god needs a new call management system. (snicker) This work was clever! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




Reviews

This...is...funny!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I so hate when this happens to me, i know this feeling. I really am enjoying reading your writes. Please don't hesitate to send me any.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Broken and relaxed, a subtle and tough combination, well done, good read.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I do love how viscious this is. So cold, dark and biting =D

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

oh wicked tongue in cheek with savory soul!~ love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

you hear the dominoes clicking too ?

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Don't you just hate that...being rerouted, and we can't even
understand what they are saying....AMERICAN PEOPLE!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great humorous write, it certainly feels that way.......great description!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

[send message][befriend] Subscribe
ju
ok, so at first this got a "lol"
but i know how that kind of frustration feels. not the praying, praying's not my thing- but the dealing with stuff, struggling, then looking around and seeing that bigger stuff is going on (and wrong) puts things into perspective.
the call center in india would suit me better.


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Thank you for calling Microsoft customer support, a representative will be with you in just a moment."

I got through once...but was hung up on after a 15 minute hold. I think maybe god needs a new call management system. (snicker) This work was clever! :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

311 Views
11 Reviews
Rating
Added on April 19, 2011
Last Updated on April 19, 2011

Author

Nobody.
Nobody.

TX



About
I am an uglier version of you. more..

Writing
awakening #3 awakening #3

A Poem by Nobody.


awakening #1 awakening #1

A Chapter by Nobody.



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Antiquity's Rose Antiquity's Rose

A Poem by OT


Poet's Vow Poet's Vow

A Poem by OT


Saxicolous Saxicolous

A Poem by OT