My Underground Music Scene

 

 

I wish that blackbird knew my name,

so he could write a blues song about me.

 

I wish I knew that blackbird’s name,

so I could tell everyone about my favorite

musician.

 

These are the perils of underground tastes.

 

 

Reviews

[raining]

out hunting, carrying my shot-gun, I too would see the sky and the birds. with the sky behind and me beneath. Like your poem

[ju]

simple words. used brilliantly. love it.

[Ariel B.]

This is stupendous!
"I wish I knew that blackbird's name
so I could tell everyone about my favorite
musician" -
that line is one of the best things I've read in ages.

[Amy Bumpas]

I wish the blackbird would stop circling my house like a
bad omen...lol! Like this line:I wish that blackbird knew my name,

so he could write a blues song about me

[Kerry O'Connor]

I love this... So pristine I could tattoo the words into my skin... and what a picture!

[John Jackson (El Juero)]

I like the 'A' side. I love the 'B' side.
Tastefully done, aboveground.

great short write.

[OT]

ahh nice!!! such a different voice to you in this one!

[emona]

that was beautiful and very deep ^^

[Robin]

Man, I relate to this piece . this is going straight to my favorites .