Pillow Whispers

Pillow Whispers

 

even as I’m drowning in the heat,

cool laughter pours from your lips

like clear liquid over smooth pink rocks

 

my own secluded waterfall

beyond the noise and movement

of a dusty desert ache

 

if I were not your bulletproof answer

when hard questions were fired

then I might not exist all

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Brilliant. A stunning work of prose. The last stanza is the best.

[Sunny Skye]

Very nice. i agree with Apathy to empathy

[Apathy To Empathy]

I don't know what to say anymore...I'm running out of positive words to describe your writing, other than it is Heavenly.

[Hollow Man]

damn you're grindin at the plastic coated human with 80 grit sandpaper and i love it.

[KAREN]

The poem is captivating from start to finish!!

[freelancejouster]

this is so enticing... love so powerful it cools burns, heals wounds and blocks further from happening... something to aim and long for, for all of us.

[Cocoacandy]

awww... see? ur good at these... good work sk, keep it up!
*cocoabean*

[Mark]

A man can only define himself in terms of the service rendered to his beloved...How beautifully you have rendered this eternal truth, Bob. Thank you.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

silken~ with drops of mercury~ gorgeous descriptives~

[OT]

ahh you have a theme in your writing, are the bells of spring ringing in your ears? haha great poetry - the "liquid over smooth pink rocks" - sensual, brilliant poetry at its best!! nice!