Tanka # Q

grin of a guard dog

melts my buttermilk resolve

as I watch my queen

lovingly feed poor children

            to frenzied alligators.

Reviews

[Kerry O'Connor]

Now here is a message of real love I'm not likely to forget :P

[OT]

ha you're on fire! tanka'd up!

alligators cry
as Queen frenzies the water
with fallen children
failed guard dog licks buttermilk
as serial kisser smiles

haha tanka day is it?

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

lol the oddest thing is, as i hit the final lines, "the dingo ate my baby" ran through my head hahaa