Chiropractic Intergalactic Fuki Power Tree

Begins at the core, and works outward. Like heartburn. Or a pistol. Love Zen you're in!

Chiropractic Intergalactic Fuki Power Tree

 

I

Feng Shui innards to maximize

balance and power of your chi

which will drip from your tonsils

like paladin poetry serum

and create a portrait of unseen

goodies that churn beneath

the whispered milk of ages

 

doesn’t make sense

it’s beyond senses

found pro bard

in

drab profound

 

hardboiled

boiled hard

Egg Fu Kung

 

II

golden wheat dances in make-believe window ballets disguised as swans telling me I kiss like a frozen snake.

no. boa constrictors can’t survive on Pluto.

not the mute cartoon dog. the former planet.

anti-gravity wingtip swing flip

through your holy checkerboard relic.

go cat! go!

and a bottle of rum

 

III

God is the spaceship.

ancient Idahoan

rust sculpture of something pulled by a horse.

 

II

gothic church rocket

aimed northwest (power)

dressed like greasy ghost-men

in

stained glass Sudoku

Zoot suit

toot! toot!

all aboard!

thank you Lord!

 

I

there is no

hair on the

 moon.

Pi.

 

Author's Note

If you're not having fun.....check your pulse.

Reviews

[Kerry O'Connor]

I can't remember when I've had such fun !! My, Oh My...word play, palindromes, tongue twisters. This is definitely one to read aloud backwards and forwards. Even the shape is fun. It looks like a flying insect smacked up against a wind screen at high speed. Splattt!

[Hollow Man]

I don't know what just happened but i f****n love it haha

[E.H. Monroe]

collected thoughts and fireworks. Few do it this well, and the structure to have it seperated by your signature thought pattern gives a form to something that lives beyond form.

Madness..persoinified

[The Silver Chord]

This was a hell of a trip, wow factor has been blown out of the water, and you seem to be running wide open. Good job bro.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

paladin poetry serum... delish!! this is fun and playful and intricately woven. :)

[Robin]

high five ..

[Deactivated_BurningDemo..]

Crazy and fun. This is well structured and a great read. (:

[OT]

haha this is bloody mental!!! but brilliant, love the structure and words - the mirror effect - found pro bard/drab profound - genius - this must have taken some time!! it's highly structured and thought out!! brilliant!