Honestly

Honestly

Some days, I feel like a healthy infant lovingly wrapped in his Father’s strong arms. Some days, I feel like a bullfrog whose been captured by a wild eyed eight year old boy with a pocketful of thumbtacks and cherry bombs. But my faith in God is constant and unshakable.   

Reviews

[Chelsea]

I like this style of poetry. It's almost written out as a story but when you read it's for sure a poem! I love this the different feelings. One of health and love one of being captive and toruted! But told in a very cool description!
I like the last line though, it shows stability with the emotions you talk about above! I love it! So glad you have faith!

[Sweet_pale_cacophony]

And that faith would give you solace..always..
I have always had these nugget of thoughts in my mind but always the thought of it being too short for a poem stops me from expressing myself.This has inspired me.
Brilliant and poignant.

[Sunny Skye]

Nice! Very good. Good Job. I really like this poem and the style like a story.

[See ya]

Awesome. I definately side with the bullfrog here. Imagine being caught by some overactive kid and being his toy for a day. Oh the humanity.

[OT]

a slight humour to this haha quite the juxtaposition hey!!!

[Gone]

That is much better than"sometimes you are the bird and sometimes you are the statue" lol. Seriously I like this poem and relate to it entirely. Sometimes both in the same day!!!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

sincere beauty even in the grip of toadstool eerie dream skips~

[Robin]

I took a frog up in kite ... can you imagine where that frog stands in the annals of frogdom ...

[Kerry O'Connor]

This is kind of funny in a kind of OUCH way.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Great metaphors, honest prose. very good.