Fountain on Decatur St.

Fountain on Decatur St.

 

pale flesh on red brick

trick is to see the fire that burns beneath

 

flames that warm my face

that burn away a forest of pretense

 

love stands in sweet ash

thankful she has revealed forgotten stars

           

            carved her truth in lies

freed my soul from its icy existence  

Reviews

[Jūdan FyreHeart]

This was beautifully written with some more fantastic images to describe great depths.

[Kerry O'Connor]

This is just beautiful, RG. A sincere expression of love for someone who has touched a life and changed it forever.

[Robin]

right on ! a tightly written poetic , great work