ride

ride

 

escape the sexy concrete riot

soar the naked outer-silence

 

existence breathes movement

time is but a green window-blur of roadside trees

 

I am a cool northeasterly breeze

 

be-

cause

 

though it touches everything

wind feels nothing

Reviews

[Maurice]

This poem is unusually short for you but rich with deep meaning.

[What happened to simple..]

this is so relaxing. as if we're in the car, watching the blur of green, time passing. Flawless occasion, much like your words. 2nd stanza favourite =) xx

[Fabian G. Franklin]

Short and sweet. I like the rhythms employed in the write.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

ahh this is such a many-layered gem.. soft yet with such an intriguing premise

[Dream Weaver]

An intriguing perspective… The wind feels nothing,
Yet can create a world of hurt… I enjoyed this piece
Immensely…Nice job!!!

[Inkcognito]

A wonderful feeling of freedom you created here...I feel like taking my Shadow for a loooong blurry ride right now...wind in my face, hair..."wind feels nothing"...brilliant!!

[KAREN]

Wind feels nothing! How do you come up with this! I love it, my mind can never come up with lines like this!

[MuSe Ampoule]

unbelievably profound.

"existence breathes movement
time is but a green window-blur of roadside trees"

[Robin]

pure feeling it here ~

[Kerry O'Connor]

Every line of this is perfection - so good. I love the whole idea behind the images and the final lines have blown me clean away.