rat trap haiku

wounded rodent flops

dark blood looks brown in sunlight

just die already!

Reviews

[GTVile]

Yeah, that's awesome. I don't even know what style of writing that would fall under, but its something fresh, at least stylistically, but I don't know that the festering corpse on the trap is so fresh, haha. But seriously, I liked that you very literally went to something that most nobody would write about. Thanks for the good read!

[Dupree]

This is interesting. I applaud you for writing about it, not a lot of people woould even think about writing about this. You are a very unique writer and I applaud you.