Such a beautiful written pome. I had to read it three times in a row, the flow in this pome is amazing.
" lifestyles change
but hate remains hateful,
ungrateful victims
of freedom are slain,
be plain to survive
the driven herd’s march,
or start making plans
to be buried and chained." That stanza is my favorite. You're an awesome writer. Thanks for sharing.
Such a beautiful written pome. I had to read it three times in a row, the flow in this pome is amazing.
" lifestyles change
but hate remains hateful,
ungrateful victims
of freedom are slain,
be plain to survive
the driven herd’s march,
or start making plans
to be buried and chained." That stanza is my favorite. You're an awesome writer. Thanks for sharing.
This is a really incredible poem, searingly honest and poetically graphic. You have real talent. I particularly like the lines 'all people unlike them;
just targets with eyes'.
Oh my ........this is a fabulous write..........of how this world is and always has been really...........it seems religion is such a general term, because now so many die in its name, yet you are right, our blood is the same colour, and yet we kill, maim and damage........there is no paradise, not anymore.........God has left the building. 100% from me.............gritty, angry, and fantastic.
what of religion?
“thou shalt not kill”
yet, spilled blood flows deep
in the names of your lords
you claim you own paradise,
build walls on the borders,
hoarders of freedom;
kingdoms of lies
languages change
but truth remains truth,
youth learn from the old ones
to kill, maim, destroy,
the game’s always deadly
home team sets to strike
all people unlike them;
just targets with eyes