awakening #3

mind claw finds purchase in the love mud

 

sifting pirated remnants

figure and fiddle with shaky variables

until blue turns to black

 

math leaves a sucking wound

(a sleepy cigarette burn in a Confirmation gown)

 

most likely

truth would rather remain buried

 

most likely

it has all been conspiracy

 

most likely

I’ve never known

what the f**k I was talking about

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

I have missed this, and I miss you dude.

[jenniewren (J.W. Bouwma..]

damn. damn. i have missed your words. i have missed this succinct knife-edge poetry and the person who creates it.. that second stanza.. damn.

[Sami Khalil]

"math leaves a sucking wound

(a sleepy cigarette burn in a Confirmation gown)



most likely

truth would rather remain buried



most likely

it has all been conspiracy"

A very interesting poem...Thank you for sharing...:).......

[Emily B]

you really should announce when you've come back into the cafe, there's no reason this should only have one review

how are ya?

[anamezic]

Damn, I really enjoyed that. It's nice to read some serious writing on here for a change.