quaint quicky #3

full fury. bare scene.

fiery gold pierces green.

 

half-cured mind disease.

sunlight through pine trees.

 

new dreams through old mesh.

re-fouled. refreshed.

 

ingested. enjoyed.

reborn. destroyed.

 

post-coital sleep.

hot dust on cold cheek.

 

hope flutters the dark,

fair-winged question marks.

 

good

          day?

 

          good

    night?

 

                good

                          bye?

good God!

Reviews

[Sunny Skye]

I enjoyed it very much. I like the way you wrote the questions and finished the poem. An excellent poem good job.

-SkyeBlanco