Don't

When the love of your life betrays you, what will you think when he comes back?

Don’t you dare touch me

Don’t you dare think I ever cared

About you

Never

 

I will never care about you

I will never love you

I loathe you

Hatred fills my heart when I look at you

 

You betrayed me

Whatever feeling I had for you

Left when I saw you with the other one

Because I always thought you would be the one

 

But you weren’t

My heart broke when you left

And now you want me back

I’ll break your heart

Reviews

[Canicus]

I like it, there is a bit of anger in it. and I like the first stanza I thought it was a good beginning for a poem. good job keep it up

[Starry Eyed]

:( Soo sad... I almost thought this was real!

[BrynnaW.]

Aww... :( I liked it but so sad... :) Good job! Keep on writing!

[Thea]

I can quite relate to this poem! Very nicely done...With great emotion! The red words sounds powerful when you say it while reading...Well done... :)